Do you like me? Standing opaque, and out of the way—
taking up space unseen
against
the wall?
Close in on me, close enough to
smell my perfume, please.
Then you’ll see
I’m a rose garden—
pick me.
Let my sweetness pool at your feet.
Close in on me, close enough to
make me visible.
(photograph by Edward Steichen, 1930)
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Kindra Austin
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“Let my sweetness pool at your feet.”
Breathtaking, Lady! ❤
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Thank you! ❤
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Outstanding write, kindra.
Your words always fill my heart with inspiration and safeness.
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Thank you, Charlie. You mean so much to me, I’m happy I can do that for you. ❤
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You welcome, Kindra. Our friendship is strong and awesome! You are the best. 🙂
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Awww, you’re the best, too! Thank you 🙂
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Anytime. I’m just happy to be your friend.
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🌞 here’s some sunshine for my friend, Charlie.
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awww…thank you. 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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You write so beautifully and this poem was so sweet. I especially like the line “Close in on me, close enough to make me visible” Thank you
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You are so kind! Thank you for reading me, and taking the time to leave a comment. I appreciate it very much. ❤
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Lovely:)
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Thank you, Kae! ❤
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🙂
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Greatly written! The woman who can only exist through the attention of a man. Sweet, flowery and silent. Not as obsolete as we’d like to think – there are still many out there. Thanks for sharing, Kindra!
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Thank you so much! ❤ I wish I could say that I don't know too many of these women.
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So do I!
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EEEeekk! I’m happy to not be one of them!
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Same here! I like being the one who brings meaning into my own life.
The funny thing is, I like flowery dresses and for years I’ve had long wavy romantic hair. You can imagine what a surprise it was for some men when words like fuck and bollocks etc would come out of my pink-lipsticked mouth. Ha ha!
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Hahahaha! That’s awesome!
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Yes, it was! And a good way to test men. See what they really expected of me.
Once me and one of my girl friend had a party together. We had decorated the place with pictures of naked male models – handsome, muscular, perfect. Across the pictures we had written ‘Use me’, ‘Own me’, ‘Kiss me’ etc. It was fun to see how uncomfortable some of the guys were around them.
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Bahaha!
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