I beat your heart black and blue, a tender plum to sink my teeth in
juice dripped from my lips, copper penny flavored–oops!
that was your life
red viscous death
that pooled at my naked feet, diluted by the salt water falling
I beat your heart black and blue, a tender plum to sink my teeth in
juice dripped from my lips, copper penny flavored–oops!
that was your life
red viscous death
that pooled at my naked feet, diluted by the salt water falling
Author of fiction, poetry, and very sweary social commentary. Editor, and co-founder of Indie Blu(e) Publishing. Co-founder of Blood Into Ink, and Heretics, Lovers, and Madmen. View more posts
https://thelighteningandthefire.wordpress.com/2016/01/07/soldier-on/
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Great 😀
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Thanks, Paul 🙂
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This is amazing!
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Thank you! At first I thought about writing, “…sink my teeth into.” Because it rhymes with blue. But I didn’t because I kind of like how automatically want to read it that way, but it’s not there. You know what I mean?
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Yeah, I understand. That’s why I don’t usually do end rhyme. It limits you on what you can say sometimes. 😊
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I feel, girl.
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